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Be Careful What You Wish For

Part 1



                                           Chapter Seventeen

                                  Be Careful What You Wish For

         A black limousine pulled up in front of Candices and Nancy's apartment; Candice quickly ran down the steps as the back door to the limousine opened.  "Put on the blindfold lying on the seat beside you and from now on you must not speak, unless the master asks a question," a voice from the front of the car said as she felt the car moving.  Sitting there blindfolded and not knowing what was going to happen heightened her feeling in her body waiting for what would happen next.  She had scrubbed every part of her body so as not to have a sent that was unpleasant.  She had also used Nancy's expensive Joy perfume to mask any smells from her body.  She had shaved her legs and under her arms as close as she dared.  It seemed like they were riding around for hours when the car finally came to a halt. She heard the drivers door open and then the rear door opened and a hand touched her, grabbing her red hair and pulling her out of the car.  "Who the hell are you," Candice said as she felt a hand slapping her across the face while holding onto her hair.

     "The rules are to keep your mouth shut or the punishment will be worse. Youre just a bitch dog that needs to be trained to satisfy your master,” the voice of the master explained as he dragged her into a building. She was pulled down a hallway through several metal doors that clanged shut into a room that was very hot and humid.  Candice felt leather straps being placed around her wrists and fastened together then her hands were hoisted over her head and the wrist bands were hooked to a chain which clanked and stretched her to the point that her feet barely touched the floor.  She heard the door open and close but was she alone because with the blindfold she couldn't tell.  It seemed like hours before she heard the door open and someone entering the room.  It was quiet for a while longer before she felt hot breath on her body and starting with her arms she felt hands rubbing down her arms over her upper body and then around her firm buttocks and down her long legs.

      "The first lesson the slave must learn is to keep her mouth shut unless the master asks a question and expects an answer.  Your little outburst in the car will cost you ten lashes with a whip.  The second thing you must learn is to be completely naked in the master's presence.  The third lesson is to be prepared to be fucked in the mouth, pussy, ass, and anyplace the master desires.  While you're here your ass is mine.  The slap and tickle you do with male slaves is nothing compared to what is going to happen to you tonight.  First, I'll be removing your clothing then youll receive ten lashes for opening your mouth in the car.  If I hear a sound from you while I'm administering the lashes Ill add more lashes until I'm satisfied.  Do you understand?"

    "Yes master, whatever you say," Candice answered.

       Candice felt a hand slapping her face hard to the right and then to the left.  “I didnt ask for a verbal reply; you could have nodded your head.  Now youre up to twenty lashes; would you like to have thirty or maybe I should double what you already have making it forty.”  There was a snapping sound like a switch blade knife opening up.  Candice felt a hand pulling her blouse away as a knife blade cut all the buttons off and then began cutting the rest of her blouse revealing a black leather bra, which was immediately cut off making her naked to the waist.  "Its a pity to ruin such beautiful clothing and maybe the next time if you pass the test you wont wear so many garments," the master explained as he cut away her skirt and thong panties and next came her fish net stockings.  She was completely naked and her body was twitching and her nipple bells rang from not knowing what was going to happen next.  She thought I'll never wear those bells again because that was all she could hear in the room.  Her nipples started twitching as she felt a hand playing with the bells. The hands began playing and pulling on the earrings Mr. Hunter had given her. A hand began to travel all over her naked body, forcing a finger in her vagina and then her ass and finally placing a finger in her mouth.  Candice felt the lash of a leather whip on her naked ass approximately five times and then it stopped.  Candice thought that wasn't so bad then the whip began again and she felt it more than before and again at five he stopped for a while.  The next five lashes really began to hurt since her bottom was the only place he was hitting her. "The bells on your nipples arent ringing loud enough.  If this time I can't hear them the ringing loud enough Ill add five more lashes.”  There was no way she wanted five more lashes.  At the first lash she shook her upper body making the bells ring.  By the fifth lash she let out a scream to the master's delight.

      "Now we come to the fourth rule.  As you noticed the lashes of the whip became more intent the higher the number.  From now on the whip will be even more intense so if you wish Ill put a gag in your mouth so just nod you head.”  Candice quickly nodded her head.  She felt a ball like object being placed in her mouth with leather straps tied around to the back of her head.  Within a few minutes the crack of the whip on her ass continued.

    Candice was hanging there thinking what had she got herself into but this was no different than her punishing men.  In fact, she was learning a lot about how to get the most out of her subject when she was the master.  She felt a wide dog collar being placed around her neck and fastened.  A dog leash fell against her bells landing between her nipples.  "Now we'll see if you can satisfy me.  Your performance will determine how many lashes of the whip will be administered later.  Remember the lashes become harder the higher the number,” the master explained while unfastening her hands that were tied over her head.  Now get on your knees and crawl across the floor like a bitch dog.  The next thing she knew she was sitting in front of the master who began removing the bells attached to her nipple rings and replacing them with something that was heavier and pulled on her nipples. "I'm tired of listening to those bells.  What I have attached to your nipple rings are nipple weights which will be increased as the night goes on pulling your nipples down.  I have to be careful because one time the weights got too heavy and the nipple ring ripped out of the nipple.  I'm placing my cock in your mouth and I expect you to make me ejaculate within three minutes, the time it takes to boil an egg.  I hope you have an educated tongue and mouth.  The punishment is twenty lashes and a little bit more weight put on your nipples if you don't succeed.”  Candice wasn't successful so the next thing she knew more weights were being placed on her nipples.  She was then yanked up off the floor by her dog collar and placed over a stool face down that made her stretch her legs like she had high heels on.  Her hands were fastened to the front legs of the stool and she felt the master's riding crop across her ass several times.  “Now you have three minutes to make me ejaculate or it will be twenty five more lashes and more weight on your nipples as he stuck his cock in Candices pussy that was soaked and wet from anticipation riding her dog fashion and slapping her across her back and ass with the riding crop until three minutes were up and still no ejaculation.  The next thing she knew he placed more weight on her nipples which were hanging down from her being fastened face down over the stool.

       Candice then felt lubricant being placed in her ass. "If I dont ejaculate in three minutes in your ass it will be thirty five more lashes with the whip.  You are at forty five and counting.”  Candice made a sound as he penetrated her.  Was that going to be ten more lashes?  Candice didn't know if she could handle that many.  Her ass hole was tingling when he finally stopped and pulled his penis out.  “This is amazing that youre not getting me excited enough.  Well have to start over,” as he unfastened her from the stool and made her sit down in front of him. “You will have five minutes to please me on this round.  You've accumulated eighty lashes plus ten more for making a sound which comes to ninety.  Plus, I don't believe you can take too much more weight on your nipples as he fastened some more weight onto them. As soon as he placed his penis in her mouth Candices tongue was moving as fast as it could, her mouth was like a vacuum cleaner sucking on his penis.  At the four minute mark the master's back began to arch and his penis grew bigger almost choking Candice as she felt him ejaculating down her throat in pulsating intervals.  "Make sure no come escapes or Ill add to your punishment.”  Candice sucked on his penis for almost five minutes not wanting anything to escape.

     She was then led over to a wall, where her hands and legs were tied so she was spread eagled against the wall.  Finally, her blindfold was removed and she saw a slender man whose face and body was covered up except for his penis that was beginning to get hard again.  “This is what's going to happen now if you're a good girl and perform two more times. At the least there will only be ninety lashes, screw up and therell be more,” as he reached over with his left hand, rubbing his hand over the many whips that were lined up on the wall beside Candice.  “I can't decide which one Ill use first.  I don't want to damage your beautiful body so I'm going to use baby oil as he took what looked like a turkey baster and began rubbing oil over her bottom and back.  After the five lashes and then a five minute rest until he reached thirty she was unfastened and placed over the stool, where the master relieved himself in her.  At the end of the next thirty lashes the master relieved himself in her ass. This time he fastened her so she was facing away from the wall and Candice was relieved since she didn't know if she could handle the last thirty lashes of the whip because her back was really sore and so was her whole body.  Definitely, it had been one of the most exciting sexual encounters she'd ever hand and if there ever was a next time she'd be prepared.  The master would ejaculate within three minutes while she was sucking on his cock, she'd make sure of that.

    "Relax Candice since we may be here for a while since I'm waiting for your roommate, Nancy Robinson."

    "I thought the rules of this game were no one was to know your name and how do you to know about Nancy?" Candice said in a soft voice afraid she would get more lashes with the whip.

      "There are no rules to the game and this isnt a game because I'm being paid to eliminate you and your roommate.  Because you were so much fun Ill let you watch me torture your friend Nancy Robinson to death before I do the same to you.  See the two whips on the end with metal attached to each end of the whip.  It won't take long to rip your skin and flesh off your body.  I found out about you on the internet and I know where you live, how much money you make and even how many rolls of toilet paper you use.  I was surprised to find out though that youre a regular at the Chains Are Us store and I even know what items you bought.  The sad part is I'll have to find another town and building in which to practice my routine.  After all, this kind of sexual encounter is fun and I always come out on top.  There are several women who want to be my slave again although I rarely use the same women twice; in your case it would be a challenge to see how you would try to trick me the next time."

           "Why don't you just finish whipping me thirty more times or make it fifty for talking and let me go.  I'd be glad to come back and challenge you when I healed up," Candice explained hoping this was part of his torturing act about him going to kill them.

   "That's a good idea. As soon as Nancy comes and Ive subdued her shell be made to watch me administer the rest of your whipping.  It will give her an idea of what will be happening to her,” the master said as he looked at five small flat television screens. "I'll be able to see Nancy as she comes into the building by herself."

      "How do you know she'll be coming? What makes you think she won't tell the police and bring them?”  Candice asked as she felt a sensation in her head of Alex Hunters voice telling her something but how could that be.

      "I left urgent messages on her cell phone and computer telling her where we are and how to get here. The people I work for control the police department in this town and in every city and state.  Nancy will call the police wholl tell her theyll meet her here.  Not wanting something to happen to you she won't wait for the police and when the police finally do arrive it will be too late.  The newspapers will carry gruesome details of how you were murdered.  The idea behind this is to warn people who think about interfering with hijacking or other kinds of sabotage that will be done around the country,” the master explained as Candices head was telling her to keep the master talking about his favorite subject of S&M and Nancy would be there very soon to rescue her.

     "Id like to use some of your techniques of bondage on males especially the three minute rule.  How could I work it with a man?"  Candice asked, thinking hurry up Nancy I don't want to die.

      "Let's see, first if he ejaculates before you tell him to punish him with at least twenty five lashes.  Most males will ejaculate within five minutes of a session with you.  Make him play with your breasts with his mouth only and if you don't come within three minutes make it thirty lashes.  Next, have him use his tongue on your pussy using no hands for the same time of three minutes then double the amount to sixty lashes.  Remember, men can he usually stand more punishment than women.  Ill give you credit, you handled your self well and I hope it takes me a while to kill you," the master answered then looked at the monitors. "Here comes Nancy just like I said by herself and how stupid, she's carrying at big 38 pistol.

     "Help, help Nancy be careful, he intends to kill the both of us," Candice shouted. “Keep your cool Candice, Nancy will take care of everything,” the voice in her head said.

      The master came over and slapped her several times in the face." Just for that I'll make you suffer even more.  Holler all you want because this room is soundproof."  “Wait until Nancy gets to the door then try to distract him,” the voice in her head said.

     I'm tied up naked and if that doesn't distract him what will?  Candice noticed on a monitor that Nancy was at the door and the master stood on the opposite side of the door. "You fucking prick! Youre the worst fuck I've ever had and when I get untied I'm going to scratch your eyeballs out and shove them in your mouth then Ill show you how a whip should be used!"  Candice screamed at the master. Nancy grabbed the door handle which opened automatically pulling her into the room where the master hit her forearm, knocking the gun out of her hand and breaking her arm as she went sprawling down on the floor.  The master stood behind Nancy who was screaming with pain from her broken arm.  "You'll be screaming even more when I get through with you," the master said softly.  Alex Hunter stood behind the master and only touched his head with his hand and the masters body quivered as he fell partly on top of Nancy, who continued to scream.

     Nancy stopped screaming from the pain as she felt a warming sensation in her head.  Alex rolled her over and taking the broken arm with both hands and pushing hard together and all the pain when away as he helped her up off the floor.

     "You haven't ever looked more beautiful Candice," Alex said as he started untying her.  Nancy was unfastening the nipple weights.

    "What the hell took you so long and how the hell did you get in my head Alex?"  Candice shouted, standing naked with sweat running down all over her as Nancy found a soft yellow blanket and wrapped it around her.

     "The question is how stupid are you not checking on who you are allowing to molest your body?  The earrings you both are wearing are a higher form of communication between human beings.  We can communicate only when youre in danger so I suggest you wear them all the time.  We may have stopped this assassination try but theyll continue to try to kill both of you," Alex explained as two men entered the room showing their FBI badges.

     "I'm Agent Bryant and this is Agent Reed and we're here to pick up the suspect and take him to the local FBI office.  There'll be a team of investigators here shortly.  Linda Lovely suggested the three of you leave immediately; something about the FBI will take this bust," Agent Reed was handcuffing the master's hands behind his back.

    "If you don't mind, can I take some of these whips as souvenirs?”  Candice asked.

     "Haven't you all had enough of this S&M crap; youre going to get killed if you're not careful," Nancy said.

       "It's still safer than going out on a date with you, Nancy," Candice explained as she grabbed several whips and her nipple bells.


                               Chapter 2

            The boat ride shell never forget from the book Black Rain

     Candace hadn't even been in her room for several moments when there was a knock at the door.  Opening the door there were two Asian women dressed in tight fitting white leather outfits.  Not saying any thing they came into the room and placed a white blindfold over Candace's eyes.  They took Candaces hands leading her down the hallway and down several steps as they headed into the lower part of the ship.  Candace heard a door opening and closing and finally she was ushered into a room that very warm.  The women led Candace over to an area where they began undressing her until she was completely naked.  White leather braces were placed around her forearms then fastened together as her arms were lifted above her head.  Standing naked Candace felt the women shaving under her arms then moving down to shave between her legs then down her legs to remove any visible hair. Her whole body was covered with a fragrant smelling soap that was rubbed into her body.  Candace felt the water being sprayed on her body so the soap was completely washed off. The two Chinese women completed drying her body with warm fluffy towels. The women proceeded to clean her rectum and vagina with a warm implement.  The next thing Candace knew they were covering her body with makeup so that her pale skin was a glistening tan.  Her red hair had been washed and dried before putting it up on top of her head.  Candace was let down from having her hands tied over head.  The women moved her to the next area where her ankles were spread apart and clamped in place. Her arms were lifted high over her head pulled apart so that she was completely spread eagled.

       Candace was restrained for what seemed like a long time. All she could hear was the Chinese women talking.  The door opened quickly as the room went silent. 

      Candace mind raced not knowing what was going to happen as she felt hands moving down her legs then a finger entered her pussy followed by a finger entering her ass. A hand rubbed up her back coming around caressing her nipple rings.  The women had removed the bells for some reason.  The hands that finally got to her face were opening her mouth sticking his fingers in her mouth touching her tongue several times. "I understand slave you know some of rules but each master has his own rules.  There will be no talking and I will do what ever I want with your body.  One thing is for sure you will be whipped.  To determine how much whipping will be involved is up to you. First Ill have to determine which whip I will be using.  I have at my discretion at lease ten different whips.  After I have determined which whip will be used slave your arms will be lowed then stretched straight out in front of you so you are in a bent over position. At this point I will remove the blindfold.  I will place my penis in your mouth; it will be your job to make me ejaculate in a specified time.  If I do not ejaculate you will receive thirty lashes from the whip I have chosen.  With you still bent over I will inject my penis into your ass with the purpose of ejaculating.  If that doesn't happen in the allotted time you will receive forty lashes.  Your pussy will be the third event of the evening. I expect to come in you or youll receive fifty lashes. Are there any questions slave?"

      "I don't think so," Candace replied.

      "I don't believe I said you could talk so that will be ten lashes before we start."

   "But you asked me a question?  The rules are if you ask a question I can answer.”

      "There are no rules and for your insubordination you will receive twenty lashes making it thirty. If you talk again the two women assisting will each give you thirty lashes. One from one side and one from the other side while you're bent over and I don't think you could handle that,” Master Blackwell explained.   The room went silent except the sound of Master Blackwell selecting his first whip, snapping it onto the metal floor in the ship making a cracking sound.  Candace feel a little sting on her back then there was a sting on the cheek of her ass.  It was amazing how Master Blackwell was using the whip because she never felt the tip of the whip at the same spot around her back and ass.  The master used seven whips before he found the one he decided to use.  It felt like it had maybe five knots tied in the end of the whip.  Candace could feel the five little knots staying on her back at the same time.

       Candace felt her arms being lowered so she was bent over with her arms stretched out and locked in place in front of her.  The women fastened small chains to her nipples as her breasts hung down the chains were pulling on her nipples.  Her upper body movement was held down by her nipples.  She could feel her body being covered with some kind of oil.  "The oil is to prevent me from leaving to any marks on your back and your bottom.  I don't one to ruin your beautiful body but I'm going to enjoy this.  A gag shaped like a penis was placed in her mouth and tied to the back of her head.  What sounded like a drum roll preceded each lash of the whip.  Candace knew from the drum roll the whip was coming next.  By the time they reached thirty lashes Candace's body was shaking knowing the whip was coming from the drum roll.  There would be no rest when the gag was removed and also the blindfold.  Candace could only see the master's feet as he stood before her. The master grabbed her red hair pulling her head up to where his penis which was quite large and swollen.  Master Blackwell's penis entered her mouth while Candace began to suck and lick as fast as she could. It she could make him come it would ruin his whole scheme.  Drops of sperm began dropping down her throat and Candace figured she had won as Master Blackwell quickly removed his penis from her mouth before he could ejaculate.

       "It seems our little slave has an educated mouth and is going to be a challenge," Master Blackwell said clapping his hands together and moving away from in front of Candace revealing the two Chinese women.  The women dressed in black were carrying a round container of burning coals that were white-hot with a rod sticking out of the container.  They set the burning coals down beside her with big smiles on their faces.

     Master Blackwell removed a rod from the hot coals to reveal what looked like a branding iron about the size of the half-dollar with the initials B in the middle.  "You will receive a memento of our little evening that you will have the rest you life," Master Blackwell explained showing the hot branding iron to Candace's face.

       "Wait a minute I'm not agreeing to been branded by anyone. I don't care who you are let me loose this game is over!" Candace shouted, trying to get loose but to no avail.

      "I will not tolerate this insubordination. You will not only be branded on each of your breasts but the whipping will be done by my two Chinese assistants Pin and Pon from each side of your body,” Master Blackwell said with a delight in his voice.  Candace started to holler as the gag was shoved back in her mouth and tied tightly by Pin.

       Candaces head looked at her breasts as they were covered with oil. She tried to move but couldn't because they were anchored to the floor.  Master Blackwell holding the branding iron that was white-hot by now slapped the underside of her breast several times as the oil was dripping off her and running down the chains holding them to the floor.  The smoking and searing of burning flesh could be seen as the branding iron was placed against her underside of her breast.  Candace tried to scream but was unable to.  The master came around to the other side proceeding to slap her breast several times before branding it.  All Candace could think of what she was going to get even with this bastard!

      Candace didn't have long to think as she felt oil being rubbed into her ass as the master's penis entered.  The branding of her breasts was horrible and hurt a lot. She felt his penis entering her ass and picking up speed as this went on for several minutes going in and out going in and out. Finally he was coming to what she thought was to come inside her when he stopped and pulled his penis.  Candace catching her breath watched as Pin and Pong positioned themselves on each side of her with whips in their hands.  She thought about these women having big smiles on their faces so she could tell they were going to enjoy this.  With her head still down so she could see what was going on behind her the master was placing his penis in her vagina.  The room went silent as Candace heard a drum roll and nothing happened.  Someone grabbed her red hair and pulled her head up to where she was faced with a big black cock after the gag was removed from her mouth.  The cock was placed in her mouth before she could say anything.  Then like clockwork there was a drum roll and the masters penis went into her vagina at the same time the penis was shoved into her mouth.  The crack of the whip across her back from each side of her body was almost simultaneous.  The drum roll again and everything was done the same way slowly. A drum roll started to increase the whipping and the penises going in and out of her body simultaneously.  The drum roll continued picking up speed as did the whipping and the penises going in and out of her body to a point finally where she felt sperm entering her vagina and sperm squirting down her throat at the same time.  Everything stopped except the spurting of sperm in her mouth and lower body.










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