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The Machine
Author: Sir Pupp
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(Added on Sep 21, 2013)
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Poor charlie is strapped into a machine and then humiliated by the girl he wanted to date, he eventually comes to love it. |
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| Reviewer:
Madsaint
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Oct 4, 2015 |
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Very good read, love mechanical stuff! need more please. (9/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Sep 25, 2014 |
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A great set up for future adventures (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
nasferi
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Sep 14, 2014 |
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like the story, she gets him good. write some more please (9/10)
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