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The Birthday Cake Author: Max Smart
(Added on Jun 20, 2003) (This month 25916 readers) (Total 53820 readers)
A young girl is given a birthday spanking and more.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: theroadtoad (Edit) Rating: Jan 7, 2009
Great little story. I think the auther should continue the story line with new characters (9/10)

Reviewer: Dürrer (Edit) Rating: Sep 30, 2004
(6/10)

Reviewer: powerm9210 (Edit) Rating: Apr 20, 2004
This is an excellent story - very erotic. I would have liked to have seen Max go a bit farther by having them turn Janice over to complete her punishment by spanking her tits and pussy, allowing her to climax and then having Janice repay by helping the others to climax as well. Just a thought!! (9/10)

Reviewer: swineburne (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2003
One of the very best stories in this genre that I've ever read! I hope the author will continue the series, with the victim getting revenge on each of her friends, especially with the girls piling on the guy. It'd be great to see others recruited into the "club" as well! (10/10)

Reviewer: LadyLibra (Edit) Rating: Jun 23, 2003
Great start i hope that all of them have a turn before they invite others to join.
I liked the fact that you (might not be right about a few things '62-64 is when they came out you had to swipe the photo with ? chapstick size) (10/10)

Reviewer: Derelict001 (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2003
This is probably the best story I have read in a long time! The characters were great; the pace was excellent; the attention to detail was absolutely perfect! I also enjoyed the fact that it didn't go overboard with the activities. (10/10)

Reviewer: don11 (Edit) Rating: Jun 21, 2003
Good - lots of atmosphere.
Good sense of personality for the male - could develope the others. If you continue keep it in character. (8/10)

Reviewer: siroco222003 (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
au contraire, just the right amount of detail. IMHO.
please continue at about the same pace (9/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
Very well written, but way too much detail and nothing too interesting to make this memorable. Been there, read this, many times. (6/10)

Reviewer: Moggy (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
Great fun! Nicely paced, characterful and meticulously written. Much to recommend beyond the spanking.
Re: suggestions for a sequel, what about a camping trip for their little club? Whatever you decide, please write SOMETHING! (9/10)

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