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Pat and the Cold Room
Author: asbjorn
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(Added on Oct 29, 2004)
(This month 9925 readers) (Total 20115 readers) |
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A couple on the edge, negotiating a breakup, goes down a chilling path. An object lesson in working it out. Or not. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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Nice build-up. Extremely well written and very erotic. HOT, not cold! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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very well done, a nice change to read something like this (9/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2005)
- Thanks for the kind words. I had planned a sequel, based on an incident that happened a year or so later, but the two people I sent a synopsis to never replied, so perhaps it was a little too much. In any case, this is not a popular story, too realistic I'm afraid. I did have a good time looking through your reviews, and reading the tens. Have never managed a ten on this site. Ah well.
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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May 1, 2005 |
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Very good! Hot, or perhaps cold?
I hope there's more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 13, 2004 |
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A very chilling story! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Oct 31, 2004 |
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Interesting reading. Definitely worth a second look. Good work! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Oct 30, 2004 |
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Damn ... i am cold after reading that one!!! Good job!! (8/10)
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