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    April May
    
    Author: Dennis C. Lee
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    (Added on Jan 24, 2005)
            (This month 69574 readers) (Total 100126 readers) | 
   
   
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    A college student becomes the victim of a mind controller, who then sells her to a sadistic pimp. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Rook
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    Mar 26, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Very good beginning. Good characters, good scene and great humilation. The sexual descriptions wsa great. Great turn on.  Would love to see more on this story. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    La Toya
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    Jan 28, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Good Start! I look forward to reading more. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    bisarah
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    Jan 24, 2005 | 
   
   
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        A very good beginning ... can't wait to read more.  There were typos, however!  If you are going to use foreign words, you need to know how to spell them. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    SimonMagick
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    Jan 24, 2005 | 
   
   
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        It's a good start. I like that things happen quickly to April. There's a few typos. I hope you'll continue the story soon. (9/10) 
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