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Marie’s Big Mistake: Case No. 11-198-9
Author: Will Harden
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(Added on Dec 19, 2005)
(This month 14405 readers) (Total 39819 readers) |
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The story of Marie, a teenager who makes a mistake and gets in trouble with the law and has to deal with the consequences of her actions...however rough and humiliating they might be. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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nice description of what she went through (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
StillSweet
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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The prison part was a little too rough for me, but I loved the "love story" between Jack and Maria. Wonderfully written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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It was a good story -- I like the "women in prison" theme. But, you had quite a few typos, and was the first part a dream? How did she get "revirginized" if not? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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Good writing and story. I just feel there could have been a bit more detail. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jaeger
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Dec 21, 2005 |
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I like it, womens prison stories always appeal to me. And good writing is always appreciated. (9/10)
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