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Marks Author: hids
(Added on May 19, 2006) (This month 13911 readers) (Total 27477 readers)
A mundane job interview takes an unexpected detour . . .

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Mabus_ut (Edit) Rating: Jul 3, 2006
Written in a style similar to my own. A few kinks (ha) in the chronology, as mentioned earlier, but I see much potential. I like the abrupt ending; it allows the encounter to be open ended, and invites the reader's imagination to wander. (9/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jun 21, 2006
Description is excellent, however story stops on the moment it should start. Suspect it is only part 1. (note that the story is added a second time? (7/10)

Reviewer: Aussiegirl1 (Edit) Rating: May 20, 2006
Well done hids, you painted a great image and I could feel her frustration. Are you planning to continue or was it just a one off story. There was some confusion over the marks ( as stated in the previous review), but that did not take away from the main purpose of the story. As a fellow author, I know how easy it is to let a slip up like that happen. Keep up the good work. (8/10)

Reviewer: bigcat (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2006
Well done. Good tension, inner life, with a quiet, suspenseful erotic air. (9/10)

Reviewer: Lisa Jones (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2006
Great story, very atmospheric and very well written. I have only one quibble, if she hadn't seen 'him' in months - as you say in the third paragraph from the end - how come she's got 'bright red marks aginst her skin' which implies a recent beating, in the first paragraph - or am I missing something? (8/10)

Reviewer: chattel69 (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2006
I wish I could have an interview like this... I might even be able to get a job this way (8/10)

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