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What if she wanted ...
Author: Polecat
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(Added on Jul 21, 2006)
(This month 139532 readers) (Total 267729 readers) |
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During a party, one girl asks \"What if she wanted to suffer permanent damage |
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mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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well done, looking for more (9/10)
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drove2it
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Sep 3, 2007 |
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Excellent female perspective and motivations. (10/10)
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FootSlaveE
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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An absolutely excellent story. I especially love the humiliation aspects. I do hope you write more! (9/10)
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Snark
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Feb 9, 2007 |
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SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!
Thanks for finish. Now... get writing! (10/10)
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Taoxx
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Nov 8, 2006 |
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I wanted to wait with the review for the last part but maybe I can encourage you with this review to write it.
The story is awesome. Can't wait for the last parts. (10/10)
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peachy
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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One of the finest, you are very talented.
I hope it doesn't end soon.
Cant wait for more (10/10)
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theSnark
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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Serious BDSM. This story is why readers come to this site. Sexual enough to excite, kinky enough to inspire. Sticks in the brain. I think it's time for my therapy (10/10)
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stevie
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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Excellent story. When will the other parts come? Canīt wait... (10/10)
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Millie
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Sep 6, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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Polecat
(Edit) (Sep 6, 2006)
- Glad that you liked it. There are a couple more chapters coming.
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Taoxx
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2006)
- When will they come?
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masterdw
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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marvelous story. Gets better and betterI hope you will give us a scene of Vicky's one year anniversary before you end this epic. I don't know what else to say. You know what you are doing, and you do it well. (10/10)
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Polecat
(Edit) (Sep 6, 2006)
- Thank you. (Bows)
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| Reviewer:
Balbars
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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This is just one of the best tales that I have read in years!!!, good pace, good story, good characters, simply awesome, please write more. (10/10)
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Polecat
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2006)
- Thank you. There is some more coming soon
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Koolaid
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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It is difficult to find any fault in this fantastic story. Characters, storyline, pace and a steady increase of intensity are all so very well handled. I truly appreciated to switch between the male and female perspective. (10/10)
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Jeanne F
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Aug 12, 2006 |
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I really need to have the sequel! You owe it to delightful Candy to actually push her to her extreme limits, inlovely detail and twisted imagination. The writing is quite good too although the transtion to 1st person Candy is a but rough - I'd have preferred the whole tale to be from her VP. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2006)
- Thank you for your comments.
More is coming
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pttwyn
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Aug 12, 2006 |
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When I started I was concerned that it might to be too extreme for me, but it's well written and enjoyable (9/10)
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TheChairman
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Many excellent ideas, and very well told. The author has me wondering just how far things will go. Part of me (obviously) hopes that he will go all the way, but another part (curiously) does not. I look forward to future installments with eager anticipation. Well worth the read! (9/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Very nice work; I hope to see where this leads to next, particularly beyond the retreat and in to other aspects (pushing limits in behavior and mental torture? Does this challenge extend beyond pain, into forced acts or humiliation? Vicky, particularly, seems to be pushing limits seperate from pain endurance.)
As already said, a great work -- very believable, and a very appealing fantasy! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2006)
- Thank you for your comments. The next chapter dwells further on this
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ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2006)
- Very nice work, as always! I like the change in perspective, too. Are you going to do this for each of them? Helps a lot with characterization, and keeping things realistic as they get more extreme!
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ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2006)
- Very nicely done, glad you see you submitting again!
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ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2007)
- Great conclusion, well done!!!
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robertahunt
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Nice fantasy, with some nice touches of realism to help us along the way. Thanks. (9/10)
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TwoToeTom
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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One of the best I've read in a while. Thanks, and keep on writing. (8/10)
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chaomancer
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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Wonderful story, thank you. I hope there's more coming! (9/10)
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IDCrewDawg
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Jul 29, 2006 |
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Excellent story! Story line was plausable, as well as the torture endured. Could add more chapters to this fine tale. Or perhaps offshoots with each charater, perhaps pov changes.
All in all great story. I look forward to your future postings. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2006)
- Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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MasterGA
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Jul 23, 2006 |
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Well written story, and could be realistic. Looking forward to future chapters. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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This was a very well-written male fantasy! Women begging to be hurt and used is probably what every Dom dreams of! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2006)
- Thanks. My feelings exactly.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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This was a very nice start. I am looking forward to seeing, were you take it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2006)
- Thanks. More coming soon.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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A nice basis for the story, and well told. Anxious for more. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2006)
- Thank you. This is my first attempt at a story.
The next part is almost ready, I hope to get it out in the next few days
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