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Sold!
Author: mp232
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(Added on Apr 21, 2008)
(This month 33750 readers) (Total 65188 readers) |
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The story of a young woman being trained and sold into slavery. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Jul 3, 2008 |
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Very nice story, even if a bit short. I like the personal point of view, and the mc-method described does sound effective. (9/10)
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elliott
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May 2, 2008 |
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This is a classic "blame the victim" story but written with an appealing first person style. The slave describes her transition to willing submissive and her desire to obey that leave the reader looking forward to the next chapter. Good use of self deprecating irony allow the reader to enjoy the slaves contemplation of her her own shame. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jdsaunders01
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Apr 27, 2008 |
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Very promising beginning, especially the MC angle. Would like to see far more of the training period, not the apparent new owner. Please continue the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Apr 26, 2008 |
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I agree with SimonMagick's review on the whole. Two negatives though: First, I think the word 'slut' is overused in erotic fiction, and does not enhance this particular story. Second, the immediate gang rape in the van, as written, does not further the impression that this is a highly organized operation. The mark of a good story, however, is that one hungers for more. Who was she before? Did some of her original psyche survive? I eagerly await more chapters! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SimonMagick
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Apr 24, 2008 |
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Quite a fine introduction. The mind control method, even though your description is brief, sounds effective. (9/10)
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