| 
     
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | 
    Father's Day
    
    Author: total_amateur
     | 
   
   
    |   | 
    (Added on Jun 22, 2008)
            (This month 53019 readers) (Total 61251 readers) | 
   
   
    |   | 
    Amanda comes home for father's day... | 
   
 
 
   
    | Ratings and Reviews: | 
   
   
    | Number 
      of Ratings: 4 | 
    
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
| 1 | 
2 | 
3 | 
4 | 
5 | 
6 | 
7 | 
8 | 
9 | 
10 | 
 
| 25% | 
75% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
 
 
 | 
   
   
     Weighed
      Average (?):  (2.5/10) | 
   
   
    Average 
      Rating:  (2/10) | 
   
   
    Highest 
      Rating:  (2/10) | 
   
   
    Lowest 
      Rating:  (1/10) | 
   
 
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Aug 18, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        just no good you need to have codes and at least a better storyline (2/10) 
     | 
   
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    chksng19
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Jun 30, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        Stories with scat should be labeled as so. Poorly conceived and delivered story. (2/10) 
     | 
   
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    JonMaddux
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Jun 23, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        You would have been better off labeling it as spoof! (1/10) 
     | 
   
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    Razor7826
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Jun 23, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        Once again reminds me why I don't read stories that don't have story codes. (2/10) 
     | 
   
 
 | 
     
       |