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The Taking of Kristi
Author: The George
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(Added on Jul 24, 2008)
(This month 51250 readers) (Total 65641 readers) |
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Nearly every morning Kristi wakes up and knows that she has been sexually violated yet no one believes her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
pyxzie
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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can't wait to find out what happens (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Aug 4, 2008 |
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This is an excellent start. My only negative comment is the number of spelling/grammar errors. If those were fixed, this would easily be an 8/9.
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| Reviewer:
blossom
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Aug 2, 2008 |
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this looks like its going to be a good story. i hope you are planning to add a few more chapters (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dr_BuzzCzar
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Jul 31, 2008 |
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This is an excellent beginning. I can see layer upon layer being added to the premise. Nice work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ukMasterC
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Jul 30, 2008 |
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Excellent plot and well written - look forward to reading the rest of the story (8/10)
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