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FarmHouse
Author: DoctorE
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(Added on Dec 21, 2008)
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the usual, kidnap,rape,abuse,torture etc. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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not abd but so many similar around (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Callisto82
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Jan 1, 2009 |
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Really liked the beginning so far, can't wait to read what's to come ;) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bellajane
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Dec 30, 2008 |
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I thought it was a good start to the story. I look forward to reading the continuation of the tale. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Book of Evils
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Dec 29, 2008 |
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Hello Doctor:
What I recognize in your story are the elements of reality and believability. Stories that are so far removed from being realistic are, in my opinion, a waste of creative effort.
I do agree that the literary format you use could use some work. I highly recommend that you purchase, on line, a copy of John Fowles, The Collector and also get the movie on DVD. It is a story about another lottery winner who purchases a remote house in England and kidnaps a beautiful woman to satisfy his fantasies. He does not indulge in the level of rape and torture which he should have but that's a whole other matter.
Copy the format of this book and you can't go wrong.
If you care to read some of my own stories, I believe you'll find the format more readable, but the important thing that I see in your account, is the realism. Keep up the good work.
Regards
B of E (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
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Dec 28, 2008 |
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Nice start to a series. Can't wait to find out more of what happens in the Farm House. Please don't make me wait too long. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chalsia
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Dec 26, 2008 |
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i love those kind of stories anyway.. such a sucker for it.. great story, can't wait to read more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Dec 25, 2008 |
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Well, we have a fairly common start, but there looks to be hope. Might want to proof your copy better: several "wrong" words, such as "taught" for "taut". Your score will increase as you add to it... hope you can soon!
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
TheDoctorIsIn
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Dec 23, 2008 |
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Nice start, I'm looking forward to the rest. I would work on having a space between paragraphs and using quotation marks correctly. Hope you update soon. (7/10)
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