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Table Games
Author: SG
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(Added on Dec 17, 2009)
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Feb 21, 2010 |
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I think the writing is solid, but I was distracted by the coincidences in the latter parts of the story. *Spoiler Alert* Why would the bartender just leave rather than having the chance of rationalizing/explaining the situation from his perspective and maybe even winning his prize? Also, why didn't Liz monitor the Asian throughout the night so she wasn't on the highest/most extreme settings throughout the night? In some sense, these are minor questions, but they could have easily been addressed more effectively and convincingly by the author. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 16, 2010 |
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A very good story, and getting better as it goes. The coincidences/bad luck in this one seem more believable than they do in most such 'misunderstanding' stories. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bennu
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Dec 26, 2009 |
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Can't wait to read more on this one (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
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Dec 19, 2009 |
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Great story, can't wait for the next chapters (10/10)
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