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Australian Holiday
Author: beck_and_call
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(Added on Sep 23, 2000)
(This month 178718 readers) (Total 218995 readers) |
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Jason's blind date had a very interesting change. He couldn't resist the beautiful mistress and give up all his life to become her slave. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
subpedesfeminarum
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Aug 31, 2008 |
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This story is as much a record of a dual performance piece as it is of the events the performance claims to describe. It interweaves the perspectives of predator and prey, as two authors alternate in bending the links to extend a single chain. The graceful interplay of their opposing roles--female and male--cruel domination and crushed submission--seem to give and take with dark, dangerous generosity. The tale is both being and being-about: the process of its creating and its telling distill the qualities of its subject, and instill it into the form of the text. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Great story. Very intense and nice twists along the way. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
masostud
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Jun 24, 2003 |
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Having read two chapters only (lack of time!) I can tell this story is how a true SM and FemDom story hould be! great ideas, fluent style and not too much spelling mistakes all in all: GREAT! Author, please continue! I very seldon give Best-grades. (10/10)
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robert216
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Oct 29, 2002 |
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Well written, but rather non-believable in many areas. Unlikely, Jason would sign a 10 year agreement upon just meeting this lady. The non-consensual capture of Justine is also not my cup of tea. I would have preferred that they both be seduced or tricked into agreeing. (7/10)
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errol42
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Dec 3, 2001 |
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great non stop mind expanding. Very imaginative (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
baiys
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Oct 12, 2001 |
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excellent!!! hope continue!!
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Sep 27, 2000 |
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now this one was really pretty good. (9/10)
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PJ |
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Sep 24, 2000 |
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One of the most intense stories I ever read. The ending knocked me out cold. (10/10)
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