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Trouble
Author: FuckDoll
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(Added on Aug 15, 2002)
(This month 10198 readers) (Total 25582 readers) |
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A girl, alone finds trouble at a bar as she meets two men who will take her (and keep her) as they please. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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nice beginning and real good story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Aug 19, 2002 |
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some grammar errors, and sentances like 'my ass and pussy were full.' and 'they fucked me forever' killed this quickly for me. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
CousinGoob
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Aug 16, 2002 |
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I thought this story was very well written. Something tells Me that many girls out there fantsize about this same thing happening to them. Don't you girls? (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 15, 2002 |
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Good intensity; not badly written (too many multi-speaker paragraphs, though). The story line is not very original. This author appears to have a decent command of style, but needs to work on characterization. I see potential though (5/10)
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