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Plant Love
Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
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(Added on Aug 25, 2002)
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Beautifull brunette model is ravaged by ancient plant monster. |
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| Reviewer:
Darkstar2173
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed this story. It was a great read. (9/10)
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agp_millie
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Sep 11, 2003 |
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Ohhhh! Professor, please, please place Part 2 here.
Phewwww!!! i think i climaxed as much as Aria. ... LOL xxx (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Sep 22, 2002 |
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LOL! Well, the first thing I want to say is that this IS a work of science fiction, although the author has done a fantastic amount of real-life research. The story codes are missing that key component even though the synopsis and title leave little doubt about the story's content. What is most striking, though, is the quality of preparation! This calibre is usually found in books by major authors like King and Koontz; NEVER in adult literature. Awesome.<br>There were few things I would have noted as errors (other than the usual punctuation and tense mistakes). The only one that was glaring was the size of the plant's phallus. Somehow, I can't quite imagine something "19 inches ACROSS" being fully inserted in anything human, much less a vagina!<br>I once rent a bondage movie called "The Plant" which was virtually the same story but told with much less skill. Had it's screen play been written by this author, I wouldn't have laughed so hard at wasting my damned money...<br>Once again, Mellanie has shown that she is a very good writer with a vivid imagination and the skills to convey both. Overall, this is a very good piece. Peace. PS If the final text of this review is covered with this: <br>, it's because the site inserted it wherever I called for a paragraph spacing. Very odd, indeed. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
mellaniehewlitt
(Edit) (Sep 23, 2002)
- Dear Lajan
You are too kind. Thank you, I spent over a week researching Plant Love. It was not easy. I wanted to do something very different, but not too weird.
My hubby suggested necraphilia but that was a complete turn-off for me.
Thanks again for the compliments. Sometimes I just wanna give up but your encouragement really keeps me going. Incidentally Plant Love has also received generally good reviews on other websites.
Lots of love
Mellanie
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| Reviewer:
omechron
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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Very good. A couple minor points but not bad at all
1) Is english a second language for you? You had some unusual turns of phrase in there.
2) Your format is a little off...going into a script type mode sometimes. It's a tad distracting.
3) You need to pick your tags a bit more studiously. I know it's tricky... but I THINK this one needs a sci fi tag ;D (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mellaniehewlitt
(Edit) (Sep 23, 2002)
- Sorry, yes may be i should move it to sci-fi. But I posted over several websites and wrote direct to BDSM, someone chose the tags for me.
Can u elaborate on what "unusual turns of phrase" i used....
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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I much preferred Mellanie's other story posted today.
This was one is rather 'out there"; the author deserves credit for an original idea (in fiction, at least -- there are many Japanese animated films with a similar theme) -- but it didn't work awfully well for me (6/10)
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- Replied by:
mellaniehewlitt
(Edit) (Sep 23, 2002)
- Thanks, can you tell me which one you preferred pls????
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| Reviewer:
master53
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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it was very different but well written and will be even more interesting with the other chapters (7/10)
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