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It's A Man's World
Author: Peter
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(Added on Aug 27, 2002)
(This month 82671 readers) (Total 112231 readers) |
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A perverted man picks up an unlucky hitch-hiker. He rapes her, humiliates her, abuses her, and trains her to become his willing sex-slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (3.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (3/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Hey! Everybody rates it a solid three! (3/10)
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Reviewer:
rcb
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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Content shows promise -- recommend English 101 (3/10)
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Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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The story has good intensity (especially the first chapter) but the careless proof-reading really detracts from its quality. An hour of proof-reading would have more than doubled its score from me. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
Powerone
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Aug 30, 2002 |
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Have to agree with the others. The bad grammar and spelling really took away from the story. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
drake7
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Aug 29, 2002 |
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The story had some good content but the poor grammar made it confusing and hard to read. Even the Mona Lisa would look bad in poor lighting conditions. The "light" that illuminates the story for the reader is a combination of grammar and mechanics; this story unfortunately had poor lighting. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
ShadowMaster
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Aug 28, 2002 |
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Good story,....sorry the spelling got to me. I know how hard it is to proof read, i'm a terrible speller myself. Edit and Revise. (3/10)
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