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Tina And Her Mother
Author: Man Ray
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(Added on Sep 23, 2002)
(This month 55269 readers) (Total 83399 readers) |
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Tina and her mother meet some nasty men. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
MasterRJ
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May 13, 2005 |
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Good stuff. Are you considering adding to it? (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 1, 2004 |
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good story, could have been better however (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Aug 20, 2003 |
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hehe i see you fell victim of multiple reviews from undefined sources.
while the theme/subject is debatable, and totally up to personal preference, i find your writing very enjoyable, and really good. this was not the piece for character development, but rather for raw emotional action – and the presentation of it is perfect.
very good piece of written word!
(8/10)
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rcb
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Apr 8, 2003 |
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Not one for the history books. The author has four stories here and they are pretty interchangable. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
masostud
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Sep 27, 2002 |
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It seems to be abit superficial and unreal in some parts. If an inceststory, mother and pubescent son would fit better. Reviewer "coyote" meets the point! (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Waldo Slaughter
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Sep 26, 2002 |
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I like the point of view and the description of events. The author has the knack of making you feel a part of the action. A short and direct write. (7/10)
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coyote
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Sep 25, 2002 |
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No problem with the general writing skills but the author seems in quite a rush. None of the niceties and no set up. Just "Slam-Bam-Thank You Ma'am." Absolutely no character development or any real plot. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
tomdlux
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Sep 24, 2002 |
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This writer should go back to grade three and learn how to quote speech in a paragraph, as well as to learn other punctuation. It would be a much ebtter use fo his time than sniffing Tina's panties. (1/10)
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hyphen666
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Sep 24, 2002 |
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The subject matter is repugnant to put it mildly, but this is still a free country. The writing is acceptable and it's a shame that the author's skills have to be employed in this manner. The lack of character or plot development, not to mention the motivation for what transpires all conspire to reduce my rating of this story. (5/10)
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