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    Kalani's First Outing
    
    Author: Cobalt Jade
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    (Added on Oct 26, 2002)
            (This month 55220 readers) (Total 68005 readers) | 
   
   
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    A Hawaiian ponygirl begins her training in a tropical paradise. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Relevart_Emit
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    Jul 8, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Excellent attention to detail ie proper footwear to allow the pony girls to do this for long periods of time. (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Feb 11, 2004 | 
   
   
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        any pony girl story is going to be great reading (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    bracemaiden
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    Jan 11, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Nice exotic location, Good descriptions, such as the detailed humiliation of the enema, or the nipple clamps.  Some thought of comfort given to the ponygirls – the bust support and the padded shoes – too many other stories try to convince the reader that ponygirls run in 7” heels!  Nice that some attention is given to them as well. (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Moggy
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    Nov 1, 2002 | 
   
   
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        Enjoyed it. Quite sensuous in its way. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    boccaccio2000g
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    Oct 27, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I normally don't care for Ponygirls stories much, but I liked this one - until the end, where the consensuality kicked in, and the very nicely composed dark mood of the story dissipated, at least for me.  But a very well written story.  I suspect that it won't have just one review furlong. (8/10) 
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