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Snuff Slut
Author: Llabmik
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(Added on Dec 7, 2002)
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Guy meets hooker in hotel and she doesn't quite measure up. A short vignette of disenchantment that I wrote years ago. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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Short, to the point, doesn't mess around with any niceties like plot or character development. This guy wanted to kill, and by golly, that's exactly what he does - I don't think I'm giving away too much by saying that about a story called 'Snuff Slut'. Worth the three minutes it will take to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Dec 13, 2003 |
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well this is fine and well if it's part of a 'bigger' story, with more detail and yes the character is a serial killer, but a guy that's simply not happy with the hooker? Oh please!
I really don't see the 'enjoyment' in reading 'shorts' like these as stories, I don't mean to offend, but do people think before they write something and pass it off as a story?
"The hooker isn't wearing Gucci, she isn't refined, therefore I'll do away with her in a really brutal way", every serial killer does this, it's not 'new', it's 'out there' in huge 'crime' fiction sections in every bookstore around the world.
Yes we know he is 'angry', 'annoyed', and basically 'immature', but what about her, there is no exploration at all with this, it's just 'I felt like writing what came into my head' with nothing further.
(4/10)
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WMassa
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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Obviously too early a Llabmik. What the others miss in terms of stylish characters I do as to (good) brutality. Very little new ideas, so what do you find, if you miss these?? Bloody boring (what a combination). (4/10)
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Swashbuckler
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Dec 7, 2002 |
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I am sorry, I hate giving below bar reveiws, but these characters neither of which seemed to have any life, before she was done away with.
I can see how the disillusionment of a John for his whore could lead to something dangerous for her, but this seems fairly flat. (4/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Dec 7, 2002 |
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Just OK. Not badly written, but there is not much of an attempt to instill either character with much of an identity. Just a brief, brutal encounter. (6/10)
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