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A Day In Life Of A Happy Slave
Author: Slave in need
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(Added on Dec 22, 2002)
(This month 52444 readers) (Total 72479 readers) |
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A day in a life of a slave owned 24/7 LTR he is punished, made to do things he hates but happy in the end as his Mistress is pleased. After all that is what counts for a slave. It's just a hard day in life of a slave who please his owner all the time. |
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Average (?):  (2.5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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Concept of the story was ok but the grammer and paragraghing lacked substance. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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the rating says it all (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mac_H
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May 18, 2003 |
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Very hard to read, comma's and fullstops at the wrong places, otherwise it could be a good story (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 11, 2003 |
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Complete gibberish. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
dbambam
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Apr 21, 2003 |
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it needs more content (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavetobenamed
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Apr 2, 2003 |
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Maybe if the writer would paragraph it better the story would be better. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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My god, this is truly SHIT. Unreadable, most definitely, more like an insult. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
annabaena
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Jan 2, 2003 |
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This is very poorly written. Many many errors in spelling and grammar. A few paragraph breaks would be nice too.
(1/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Dec 31, 2002 |
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Unreadable.
---CN (1/10)
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