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A Sissy Slave's Just Rewards
Author: Sissy Roxanne
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(Added on Feb 16, 2003)
(This month 98771 readers) (Total 167805 readers) |
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A day in the life of a sissy slave, where her transformation is continued by a wonderful Mistress. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
Rating: (7/10) |
Lowest
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Reviewer:
sissyscotty
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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In spite of previous reviews I enjoyed reading this. I agree it could have been a little better, but it still caused me to play with myself, wishing it was me being put in the men's piss room to earn a little bit of change for my mistress. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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I hate to rain on this parade, but I found this story to be poorly edited, especially part 3, and repetitious. There was nothing novel about the plot or the exercises that the sissy slave was put through. It didn't help either that the narrator changed and proceeded to speak in gargantuan paragraphs that were filled with what I like to call "spiel" check errors. Obviously this type of story has appeal to a portion of the site's audience, but as a minimum it should show some effort to remove the more obvious distractions that can and did, in this case, get in the way of my enjoyment of this story. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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The story concept was excellent. Wow two years for an update but I am glad that the author finally did update us on "her" life. The update was excellent and I could almost wish it was me. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
spandexbound
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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A good story with real potential. It could easily be an "8" if the story went more inside the thoughts and feelings of the first-person narrator. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jul 9, 2003 |
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pretty good action overall. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Feb 18, 2003 |
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i think i was looking for more punisment with the slave.. like for example a full description of how the chasity belt looked in appearance, how did it feel when on.. how long will it have to be on.. also what kind of punishment was giving to the slave penis and balls and how did he feel.. just needed more desciption in regards to the slave.. it just lacked the quality of more descriptions. (4/10)
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