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Collared On Line
Author: Lainnie
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(Added on Mar 4, 2003)
(This month 9923 readers) (Total 22771 readers) |
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Vulnerable housewife gets suckered into slavery, initially online, then in real life. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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The premise of the story is real good one. How many of us have emailed, cybered, or PM each other? What if a Dominant one of THEM turned a Submissive one of YOU into their slave? Two things that were crucial here, in my opinion, heh, heh, is a grabber beginning, and some good editing. It was a good story that had potential to be great...don't give up. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 26, 2005 |
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was ok nothing great but a good read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Aug 1, 2003 |
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the plot is original, I would like to know what happens next to the poor woman. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Jul 15, 2003 |
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i am going to say this one more time (yeah, right....as if once more will actually be enough): IF YOU ARE GOING TO POST A STORY FOR THE WORLD TO SEE, HAVE SOMEONE BLOODY EDIT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's so annoying to start reading a story that you think is going to be great, only to find yourself caught up in idiotic grammar and spelling errors. @ instead of #, or gods forbid, the actual word "number"? just edit your bloody stories and save yourself the embarrassment! (3/10)
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- Replied by:
esclavadana
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2003)
- perhaps you're right, I cannot judge since english is not my natural language, but I think the plot is good, I've enjoyed the story.
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