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Awakening in the Mist
Author: Mike W.
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(Added on Apr 8, 2003)
(This month 49908 readers) (Total 64013 readers) |
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A frustrated man learns he needs to dominate his lovers to find contentment. He encounters his first willing victim, when given an offer he cannot turn down. |
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Mowmow
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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I wonder if the next chapter will be coming. Overall I'd say you show skill with your writing. I'm sure I would be as entertained reading another genre done by you if it was written with your languid style. It flows nicely. Please do continue.-MW (9/10)
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crickette
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Nov 28, 2003 |
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Good start. I can not wait to read the next Chapter. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
myfigment
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Aug 20, 2003 |
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Good start. Would do some proof reading. Nice flow leading to... (8/10)
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TERRANCE E SWAN
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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nicely paced and good approach. I like the public aspect. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Apr 13, 2003 |
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Nicely written, and I definitely encourage the author to continue. However, it was a rather meagre opening chapter. (6/10)
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