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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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not into beatiality, but i did enjoythis one (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Apr 25, 2003 |
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Read it once. Thought it was okayish. Then I saw 4 x 10* reviews and gave it another read. I still think it's okayish. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Pleasing You
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Apr 21, 2003 |
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i get so tired of the stories that simply talk about cunts, assholes, whipping, etc. This one somehow draws me in so that i feel like i am lynn. You have described her reactions (and His) so well that it makes me shiver. The only thing is that i want it to be longer. Will part 2 be coming soon? Please! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lords_butterfly
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Apr 20, 2003 |
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Thank You, Master......for submitting "O/our" story. It gives me goosebumps everytime i read it. i am anxious for May to come, so that the story can become a reality. You have such a way w/ words.. that brings the reader right into the story. FIVE STARS, Master! i encourage everyone to give this story a read through. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lord butterfly
(Edit) (Apr 20, 2003)
- My pet, you are the inspiration for My writing and for all of My erotic thoughts. When I think of you, of U/us, My mind assumes a life of its own. Thoughts of happiness and sensuality flood over Me... My desire for you causes My imagination to explore the farthest reaches of possibilities.
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| Reviewer:
kinky sub
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Apr 20, 2003 |
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Although the beginning seemed slow, it quickly picked up speed and got to be one of the hottest short stories I've read. Do part two soon, please! (10/10)
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sub for you
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Apr 20, 2003 |
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Wow! Well written and extremely erotic. This story made me feel like i was there! Well done!! (10/10)
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