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The Other Side of Midnight
Author: Lil Wolfie
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(Added on Jun 24, 2003)
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A Master/slave meet up for the first time and begin the long journey into night... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
sneeuwuiltje
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May 3, 2007 |
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Great description of all the emotional turmoil going on, and i love that for once it is also writtin from perspective of the Dom.
(9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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very well written (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterRodsPet
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Jan 11, 2005 |
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From the standpoint of a new sub/slave, I thought the story was wonderful, it gave me chills as I felt it was me in that story. Would love to know what happens next though. Will there be more? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Dec 12, 2003 |
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The 'wee' errors were so easily overlooked (ok really MINOR MINOR corrections needed) all because it all flowed so well.
Loved it! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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I definitely liked this story! There was one thing that bothered me though, more in the mechanics than the plot. The author did a good job of switching perspective for the most part, but it really grated on my nerves how the character that was in first person would sometimes refer to the other as "you" and sometimes as "he/she." Generally speaking, in order to minimize confusion, it's helpful to pick one pronoun and stick with it throughout the story. Other than that, a great story! With a teeny bit of editing, I'd say this story is definitely publisher-worthy. (7/10)
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