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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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one of the few stories I have seen with thissubkect snd I wish there were more (9/10)
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Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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A very well written story. It certainly possesses intensity but not enough eroticism for my tastes. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Thomas
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Sep 23, 2003 |
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Loved the story. Great writing...
The only thing I found lacking is the character developement of the predator. Does he just appear there? Why is he so set on doing this to her? Even if he is a madman, there should be some explanation of who he is and what his personal grudge agaisnt the victim is. He seems to have one. She was not a random victim. He knew her name and is determined to see his work born out. Why is he though?
But like I said, great writing. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Amber
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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Loved the story. Very well written. One of the very few stories I have read that incorporated rape with impregnation. Very erotic and hope the author continues story or posts some others. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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This one pushes all the right buttons: restraint, rape, humiliation, forced pregnancy. The language is solid, the tempo of the story frantic, the violence tangible. Yet, it leaves some more actual content to be desired. The motivation is needed even though the fast pace of the story almost makes up for the lack of it. Almost but not quite. It might be clear enough to the author but to the reader, it just isn't founded in reality enough to be utterly believeble and yet, not surreal enough for it to doesn't matter. A solid read nonetheless. (7/10)
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