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Family Drama
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Sep 27, 2003)
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Southampton's problems seem to overtake him when a customer offers him a solution. The solution is perfect but for the female part of the family. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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An exceptionally well developed store line. We eagerly await future developments.
Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
frenchgus
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Nov 1, 2003 |
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thank you, please more ! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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This story doesn't seem to have your usual intensity to it, however I was enjoying the character development. It seems to move quite briskly and a bit jumbled at times. I trust the followups will bring some heat. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
annasherwood
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Oct 1, 2003 |
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i get the feeling that english is not the author's first language, or that his proof-reading was very sloppy...i couldn't get through it, and abandoned trying to make sense of the structure early on... (3/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 5, 2003)
- You are right. English is not my first, neither my second language. It's my third, and after that one ther come three more. Sorry for any inconvenience.
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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The cumbersome prose really ruined it for me. The writer really needs to work on their basic writing skills. Premise is OK and plot developes apace. Let's see what the author can do in subsequent parts and I may revise my review. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2003)
- Sorry, I'am not english. Still I hope you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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Good job (8/10)
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