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The Nerd Author: The Outsider
(Added on Oct 21, 2003) (This month 51181 readers) (Total 61756 readers)
Young nerd enslaves an Amazon woman who used to pick on her with the help of her sister, and look as the cards helping her.

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Weighed Average (?): (3/10)
Average Rating: (2.5/10)
Highest Rating: (3/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: littleslut (Edit) Rating: Aug 3, 2004
needs serious reworking (2/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 1, 2004
it is in serious need of editing, grammar and alot of other work needed,
has promise, but you might want to consider either rewriting or at least editing it (2/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Oct 24, 2003
Disappointing. The story had some promise, but is in need of some major rework/editing. (2/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Oct 23, 2003
Sorry, but this isn't too good. The premise is OK, but the writing isn't. (2/10)

Reviewer: e.e. norcod (Edit) Rating: Oct 23, 2003
The numerical score says it all. Poorly written. Couture, that's what you were trying to say. The author needs to sit down and work with an English teacher on basic writing skills. (2/10)

Reviewer: S_Couture (Edit) Rating: Oct 22, 2003
I think someone could take this and probably make a good story out of it. I don't want to give a really savvier review here, but the story needs editing . . . *a lot of editing*.
There are some great kinky ideas in here, but they are wasted.
(3/10)

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