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Dita's Crusade Author: The Outsider
(Added on Dec 11, 2003) (This month 55314 readers) (Total 75958 readers)
After Dita captured wonder-woman, she altered her name and used her to capture other "toys" for her to use.

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Reviewer: Echotango (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2006
I like Outsiders ideas don't get me wrong but he really needs to work on the writing skills. Mediocre but I've seen worse. (4/10)

Reviewer: kittenfemme (Edit) Rating: Dec 15, 2003
I just couldn't finish this story. It has an interesting premise though. I'd love to see it after severe editing. (3/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Dec 11, 2003
What can I say, this one does not work for me. I grew up lusting after Wonder Woman and this one is a terrible disappointment. It appears that English is not the author's native tongue which explains some of the grammatical errors, especially in tense. This story just doesn't flow, it seems that any idea that popped into the author's head was immediately set to paper. There are some interesting ideas and plenty of humiliation in this effort, but the writing and lack of planning kills it. This could have been one of those over the top, totally insane stories, that defies one not to like it, but it isn't, which is too bad. By the way the CIA did not exist in 1945. (2/10)

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