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Bavel
Author: Ms. Michele
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 49107 readers) (Total 62374 readers) |
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Dungeon games with Ms. Clare in an alternate reality on a distant world. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
Coriia
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Apr 21, 2008 |
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I really liked this story even though it looks unfinished. I loved the dialog, the interplay between characters was very nice. The technical elements could use some polish. I find myself disappointed that its over. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Feb 22, 2005 |
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First part's review only, 3 scenes so far. Interesting settings, might benefit from more description of pre-scene (background, environment, how are they dressed, what's the weather...). Transition (journey ?) from one scene to another could help too. What are the main character's motivations ? So far the tagging is not fully satisfied... hoping to see more in the following part. (5/10)
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