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Medieval Marriage
Author: Kaja_m
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(Added on Jan 9, 2004)
(This month 53897 readers) (Total 70541 readers) |
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Story of a girl living in the dark ages, learning to accept her fate as an older man's new bride. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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enjoyed the story not real kken on midevil times stories but it was well worth the read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jan 31, 2004 |
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Although this story is very short (and the paragraphs are very long, too long)it contains a spark of realism that very few stories here have. The woman's emotions are well described, as are her husband's brutishness. The author has a very nice way with words -- but needs to work on organizing sentences so that one flows into the next more smoothly. With good sentence flow, paragraphing becomes very natural -- whereas here it is rather haphazard. But a very promising debut story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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In story telling the reader usually awaits the unexpected. In "Medieval Marriage" the other shoe never drops. While well written, the story inexorably leads to no surprises... (7/10)
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