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The Picture - Enslaved Author: slvWriting
(Added on Jan 22, 2004) (This month 82821 readers) (Total 111263 readers)
An occidental girl is brought to an Arab harem.

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Reviewer: big duce (Edit) Rating: Dec 9, 2008
it was ok worth the read if your in to the whole arab torture thing. (7/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Jan 23, 2004
The premise is fine, but the execution is lacking. For example, there are a lot of times when "she" and "he" are mixed up, and it is distracting when the author refers to a woman as "he." Also, please write your own endings. Don't make your readers do it. (5/10)
Replied by: slvWriting (Edit) (Jan 24, 2004)
I revised the story and could not find one single passage where "he" or "she" are mixed up... so if you could point out exactly where are you referring would be a lot of help. Also, if you don't like the ending to be chosed by the readers say it's your opinion, cause I've received 6 mails in a day telling me they liked that and also telling me which ending they'd prefer.

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