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Busted Author: slave barry
(Added on Feb 1, 2004) (This month 60824 readers) (Total 85419 readers)
Maid slave self-induces an unearned orgasm and pays the price. This story is a work in art and will have chapters added in the future.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Feb 5, 2004
slave barry hypes up the reader for one heck of a punishment session and then “leaves this part to the readers imagination”? What an anti-climatic let-down! Many of the scenes of bondage were also glossed over. I think that shorter paragraphs and using the past tense of verbs would also make for easier reading.
Not to be totally critical, I did enjoy the varied bondage positions and taking in Amy as a dom-in-training.
(7/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Feb 1, 2004
an average story. Concept is intersting, especially bringing the maid into the picture. (6/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Feb 1, 2004
Pretty good story, with one major disappointment. You checked the story code for CBT, but when you got to that part, you put in a quick line about leaving it to the reader's imagination. If you are uncomfortable writing CBT scenes, I would suggest that you write stories that don't include them. (6/10)

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