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The Present Author: Ross Martin
(Added on Feb 27, 2004) (This month 61843 readers) (Total 90295 readers)
A woman is sent as a package to a Don in the outback. A cruel Dom at that. Who would do such a thing?

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 23, 2009
good job (9/10)

Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Jul 18, 2005
Good story. And like many good stories, it raises more questions than it answers. Well worth the read. (8/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: May 2, 2004
Good story held back due to minor editing problems and a very abupt ending. (6/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Apr 30, 2004
On balance I enjoyed this story, especially the two main characters. The ending bothered me a bit because it appeared contrived. I did not accept the fact that this masochistic lady could have also been a dominant in her spare time. It sort of reminded me of the deus ex machina approach the Greeks took to tidy up their rather convoluted tragedies. The author also did himself a grave disservice by his lack of editing, even to the point of allowing obvious typos to be incorporated into what was a fairly well written story. All this being said, I would certainly read another of this writer's stories if it were posted here. (7/10)

Reviewer: teamster (Edit) Rating: Mar 7, 2004
okay for a start... then what? (6/10)

Reviewer: Wyn (Edit) Rating: Mar 2, 2004
Interesting story. I hope there's more to come. (7/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Mar 2, 2004
Well written, but ended too abruptly for my taste. I guess it was just a trailer. (7/10)

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Feb 29, 2004
Mr. Martin seems to revel in using the words “cruel” and “brutal”. But so far, so good. We'll see what develops.
(7/10)

Reviewer: Faibhar (Edit) Rating: Feb 27, 2004
Jenny Craig meets FedEx in this preliminary to what may unfold as rich entertainment. (6/10)

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