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Dawn's Tale Author: scifitales
(Added on Apr 14, 2001) (This month 103757 readers) (Total 141457 readers)
Nordic-type aliens come to Earth and gently abduct Dawn, who begins a new life as a slave/pet/toy/servant/working animal.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: May 28, 2011
An extremely well thought out story with good characterization and especially Dawn's feelings and emotions. There are plenty of details about the little clothing that is worn, the locations, the work, hospital treatment, sex etc. that enables the reader to to almost think they are there watching the scenes themselves.
There were several times i felt i was being talked down to. This occurred when the author was using Mistress to describe life on Homeworld to Dawn. This is a very hard thing to do and nearly always fails (even on tv and in films). Now this is purely a personal thing but i would have preferred a little more in the prolouge (eapecially as the author had gone to the bother of doing one). The only other area of concern was the number of typos (miss spelling like "her" insted of "here" or missing words). It did become slightly annoying and a little distracting from the story.
Overall a very enjoyable story well worth the eight i have awarded it. i look forward to reading more about Mistress, Dawn and possibly Master. (8/10)

Reviewer: Wmnwholves (Edit) Rating: Jun 30, 2004
Once again a very imaginative story. Would love to see a sequel as with several of your other stories. I hope you are keeping up the work. (9/10)

Reviewer: teamster (Edit) Rating: Apr 17, 2004
Imaginative and well-written yarn. Actually you might make a case that the Eridani are doing all the rest of us a favor by abducting all the pea-brains like poor sweet Dawn from the Earth. I just hope they take all the intellectually-challenged men while they're at it and turn them into garbage-disposal units or something. Nah just kidding. (9/10)

Reviewer: joyfull8nl (Edit) Rating: Mar 7, 2004
This is one of the stories I red first. maybe a year ago, I thought I rated it yesteday but see that this story is published on this site two times. Fantastic story, full surrender of a woman to a superior species that have protecting laws for drones (species between the superior species and animals ) as she. The author has thought of arranging the world and the daily beiing in a way that animal like behaviour is made acceptable for even picky humans.
(10/10)

Reviewer: john964 (Edit) Rating: Aug 23, 2003
excelent story (9/10)

Reviewer: ron8nl (Edit) Rating: Aug 17, 2003
This is one of the stories I red first. maybe a year ago, I thought I rated it yesteday but see that this story is published on this site two times. Fantastic story, full surrender of a woman to a superior species that have protecting laws for drones (species between the superior species and animals ) as she. The author has thought of arranging the world and the daily beiing in a way that animal like behaviour is made acceptable for even picky humans. (10/10)

Reviewer: mlbryant (Edit) Rating: Feb 22, 2002
Well written and thought out - the plot flows neatly from the setup and the transformation is very believable. (8/10)

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