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My Choreographed Death
Author: John Lubber
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(Added on Jun 16, 2004)
(This month 53528 readers) (Total 62327 readers) |
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I am tortured and snuffed in the gruesome and horribly painful manner I have always desired by a sadistic couple from the midwest. |
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emmacd
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Feb 5, 2005 |
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What a mess. Likes reading it though.It is hard to believe that such people exist. Took a lot of imagination to think this up. I will look for other of your writings. emmacd (5/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 13, 2005 |
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This is a stunning effort.Unfortunately the content is such that this type of story will appeal to only a very limited fraction of the site's readership. It's a damned shame that people don't have the interest to explore those areas a bit beyond their own narrow interests. The author should be complimented for his honesty, as well as his excellent writing style. (9/10)
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SickPuppy888
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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SEemed odd that the tense of the story suggested he lived. (6/10)
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rousseauimpaler
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Jun 16, 2004 |
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as good and as horrible only a snuff-story can be.also it is a well-written piece,not too long nor too short.absolutely entertaining.in future,we would love to have some woman snuffed in his stories like this,maybe. (8/10)
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