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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
(Edit) |
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Aug 4, 2004 |
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This is one of those standard plots featuring a familiar cast of characters, but somehow the author makes it into more than it is. It has its moments, in fact there are quite a few of them which is why this reader is thoroughly enjoying this one. My compliments to the author for a job well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Naughty Puppy
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2004)
- Lex,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts regarding
our story. We were most pleased to read your
review as we knew the plot was formulaic and
we'd need some decent characterizations and a
few twists in order to make it work.
It's comforting to know that we achieved
this objective, at least to some degree.
Thanks again & Take Care.
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| Reviewer:
wabbit
(Edit) |
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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This to me is one of those stories that keeps getting better with each new chapter !! i loved the way the filmimg was described in the 1st person as an after fact rather than as it was being done..It very much added to the erotica, and i hope for many many more chapters !! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Naughty Puppy
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2004)
- Wabbit,
Thank you for your kind words concerning
our story. We were indeed pleased to find
that you enjoyed Veronica's narration
in part four, especially since we put some
thought into that particular section.
I know you asked for more chapters,
but seven is all we had. :-(
We do hope you enjoyed that second half
of the story as much as the first.
Thanks again & Take Care.
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) |
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Jul 27, 2004 |
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I eagerly await part five. :) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Naughty Puppy
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2004)
- BDSM_Tourguide,
Thanks for your words of encouragement!
We do hope the final chapters lived up to
your expectations. Thanks again & Take Care.
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| Reviewer:
drake7
(Edit) |
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Jul 17, 2004 |
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Very good story. The use of different terms, as opposed to some of those more run of the mill terms, was interesting. I liked the introspective nature, in that you let the reader know what Veronica was thinking, but it would have been nicer if she had spoken a bit more. Even if only to let out the occasional yell or scream. I am looking forward to the next installment. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Naughty Puppy
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2004)
- Drake7,
Thank you for taking the time to review our
story. Early comments like yours definitely
helped fuel our desire to complete our edits
and get the rest of the chapters submitted in
a timely manner. And, of course, we do
hope that Veronica spoke enough later in
the tale to meet with your approval.
Thanks again & Take Care.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) |
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Jul 17, 2004 |
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Teen/non-consensual isn’t usually my cup of tea, but I have to admit I rather liked this one. I’m certain that others who appreciate this type of story will enjoy this talented author’s work also. Why did I click on this story in the first place? Well, the title intrigued me and once I had begun reading I didn’t want to stop.
I’m not sure why this has been given an incest code, but I’m assuming that aspect will be introduced in future chapters.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Naughty Puppy
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2004)
- Alex,
We're still not really sure what to say besides,
"Wow! Thanks!" We were both floored that
someone of your caliber thought so highly of
our story, especially since it is not your cup
of tea. Of course, we hope you enjoyed the
ending as well as the beginning.
Thanks again & Take Care.
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