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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
(Edit) |
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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Very Very well written! I would love to see what comes next. If it is any were near the way this was writren, then I say, get it published.
La Toya (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
wabbit
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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Well written story giving a great perspective to the beginning of a true D/s relationship...PLEASE, tell me that this is only the 1st of many more chapters.... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
graceanne
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2004)
- Thank you. I am actually Planning on writing more on them, but I'm taking a break from that story. I have several others that I'm going to be putting here at bdsmlibrary, but if you want to read them now they are at literotica.com and eroticstories.com.
Grace
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| Reviewer:
Mobius
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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Like it so far keep it coming I will read it when it comes. Push it little farther other than making her sign a contract have her lose her Identate, make her a non person, property to use at his pleasure (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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I loved reading "Alyssa`s New Relationship". Please tell me you are not going to let it end there. Despite the d/s relationship, the feel of the story was sensual not just subserviant as most of the d/s stories I have read. Your interst was constantly held, the flow was excellant. I look forward to your next installment or merely your next work.
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| Reviewer:
Driveslikeagirl
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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Wonderful flow. You engage the reader immediately. You capture the nuances of the emotion, yet do not overburden the story with narrative. Excellent! Thank you so much for sharing it. (9/10)
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