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Pleasure Incorparated
Author: MysticPetite
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(Added on Aug 6, 2004)
(This month 137939 readers) (Total 206343 readers) |
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Allison and her husband go on a vaction to a resort. Just not any resort but one dealing in sex. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Moste excellently written, littered with good ideas and great dialogue.
JJ (9/10)
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countrygirl9662
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Oct 26, 2004 |
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This story has great promise. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
Update: Just finished reading the last chapter.Very well written, could hardly contain myself while waiting for more chapters. This story held my attention from beginning to end.
BRAVO!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
learningtopleez
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Oct 16, 2004 |
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What a sensuous and erotic vacation! Very well written! Just found this story recently and spent two days reading all chapters up to date. Am sorry the vacation is almost over! I'll be looking for more stories written by you! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sunshine
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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I thought this was very well written and certainly kept me entertained throughout. Keep up the good work it is very much appreciated! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MysticPetite
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2004)
- Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed my story so far. I tried not to make it to far out and unbelievable.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 8, 2004 |
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A beautiful, sensuous story. The couples are real-world in actions, yet there is the suspense of what will happen next.
A great story for a mostly vanilla couple to get excited by, and to wish they could participate in!
This just keeps getting better and better. I'll hate to see their vacation end.
The story continues at the same high level of quality.
Thanks for a wonderful addition to my library. Hope you write more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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stories do not get much bettee then this, nice vacation (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Aug 11, 2004 |
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Very good story so far :) I'd love to see more.
LD (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lorca
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Aug 11, 2004 |
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Very interesting plot, well written, promising story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Aug 11, 2004 |
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Well written and very interesting vacation spot. (9/10)
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