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Retribution Author: robdanob
(Added on Aug 20, 2004) (This month 49378 readers) (Total 62834 readers)
Evil pair get pay back.

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Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Aug 23, 2004
A decent premise, but the shoddy editing did it in. Plenty of typos, broken sentences and gargantuan paragraphs made reading this short story a painful experience. (5/10)
Replied by: robdanob (Edit) (Aug 25, 2004)
Thanks for the review.
I agree completely with your comments on the editing and general technical content.This is my first attempt at writing and I am pleased that the story itself was well recieved.All I need to do now is brush up on my typing, general finishing, presentation and of course spelling.Thanks again, look out for more in the future.
Robdanob

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