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Immortal Sin
Author: littlered
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(Added on Sep 3, 2004)
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based in the 50s a young girl gets pregnant and is sent away from home to have it, she meets with a nasty house mistress but also a very loving freind. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 24, 2006 |
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Human story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
foundling
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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personly i disagree i thought the story was well thought out. i wouldnt rate on grammer although a proof reader would be advisable feel free to email me if you want my services (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Sep 7, 2004 |
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The rating is only poor due to what appears to me to be a total lack of editing. The ideas in there have potential, but the wrong words, lack of appropriate capitalization, missing & misplaced punctuation, etc., make reading of the story next to impossible.
I've read littlered's stories before and they have been good. Please find someone who can fix the flaws! (1/10)
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