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The Trap Author: Cambridge
(Added on Oct 29, 2004) (This month 79302 readers) (Total 113201 readers)
William receives obedience lessons from Ms. Caroline Tanaka, a gorgeous Asian woman hired to entrap him. He soon winds up on the business end of her strap-on.

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 23, 2009
good job (8/10)

Reviewer: duchifat (Edit) Rating: Nov 4, 2004
waiting for the next chapters (10/10)
Replied by: cambridge (Edit) (Dec 4, 2004)
Your kind words and rating for the story are much appreciated! I'm glad I finally registered to be able to respond to reviews. Authors love to know that there are real readers out there somewhere (smile).

Reviewer: Mr. Pete (Edit) Rating: Oct 30, 2004
Basically good story with a few exceptions (don't keep reading if you don't want plot stuf given awy). The main problem is that there doesn't seem a reason for the trap... maybe in subsequent parts? Still, the guy is caught but for no apparent good reason. A second minor problem is in the editting... a few quotes missing the quotes. (7/10)
Replied by: cambridge (Edit) (Dec 4, 2004)
I'm glad you liked it. The reason for the trap is detailed in chapter two (out of four) so you guessed right that it was revealed a bit further on in the story.

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