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Bad Carrie
Author: My Lord's Angel
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(Added on Dec 11, 2004)
(This month 68924 readers) (Total 109322 readers) |
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A slave is punished and tortured for displeasing her Master by a diabolical scheme. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
senorlongo
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Sep 12, 2012 |
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The story was quite good and it was well written, BUT I will never understand why an author would begin a story but not end it. This story will never have an end--too bad. (8/10)
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maryrose
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Apr 22, 2010 |
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Enjoyable story, has me wondering about the Master's real intentions already-has he really abandoned carrie to the hillbillies? Lots of room for things to get deliciously worse for poor carrie... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 23, 2005 |
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It's an okay story, but rather obvious in that those "hillbilly" guys are paid by or friends of the Master's. And as someone named carrie, i have have to say: Trigger? Who are you? Roy Rogers? {{{humming Happy Trails ...}} (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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the story premise was good ... albeit twisted there at the end, but your grammar and spelling really took away from it. i hope you work on that when you add the next part. (Word really does have a good spellcheck and grammar funtion key.) i am looking forward to seeing where this goes ... (5/10)
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- Replied by:
LordLaraby
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2005)
- As a reader who's well acquainted with the English language, let me say that this reviewer has missed the whole intent of the style of writing. There is no improper grammar except that which is used by the backward males who are actors in the scene. Apparently, this reviewer should get a course in reading comprehension, and literary appreciation.
Just my 2 cents.
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emmacd
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Jan 15, 2005 |
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quite like a personal experience, only it meant a long walk bound and in high heels It is only one of personal experiences. Other chapters should reveal simalarity to my experiences. Please write more.Emmacd (10/10)
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slavelucy
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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As a fantasy, this is a GREAT opening chapter, and i v much look forward to reading more. It's well written, nicely paced...and, well, horny! The only thing (a small thing) that i would change, ideally, would be so much use of the world 'girl', but that's just personal preference. i think the writing is worth more than a 7/10...but it's hard to mark any higher when the story has only just started. As i said, looking forward to reading more!
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Ruby
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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The nightmare has begun and now I can't sleep.
Carrie's Master is one sick SOB!
Did you mean to put MC - mind control
or NC - Non consensual for the story codes?
Cause this is way past SS&C.
You've got the great begining of a horror story here.
(8/10)
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