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One Two Buckle My Shoe
Author: Severin Rossetti
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(Added on Dec 24, 2004)
(This month 53761 readers) (Total 70341 readers) |
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A shoe store salesman learns what it really is to 'serve' a beautiful woman. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
pet10
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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It's a charming story! I’m very regretted that it has no continuation, but it is true the best novels are incompletely everybody can dream of the Steve’s adventure free…. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jens777
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Jan 19, 2005 |
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It was a quit good reading, but you can extend the storry by telling how the salesman has to serve Madams friens. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 15, 2005 |
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I loved reading One, Two, Buckle my shoe. It is one of the best stories I have read on here in a long time. It was well written and left just enough to the imagination to have you hungering for more.....their will be more, right ? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
duchifat
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Dec 25, 2004 |
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more.please more... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
severinrossetti
(Edit) (Dec 25, 2004)
- thanks so much for your kind review of my story! is nice to get feedback, especially when it's so positive! This is the first story I've posted to this site, and have only just registered with it so no profile yet....will sbmit more soon though, and on the meantime more of my stories can be found at my free website, SEVERINSWORLD.COM, where there can also be found links to other sites where my stories have appeared....
Thanks again and Merry Christmas!
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Dec 25, 2004 |
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That was amazing Severin. So innocently sweet and subtle, I hadn't realized I wasn't a shoe salesman until I reached the end. I hope you'll write more. (10/10)
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