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Mona
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on May 10, 2001)
(This month 65489 readers) (Total 85693 readers) |
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The farm girl forced to move to city ghetto when father loses his job. Rough kids have brought corporal punishment back to the school. Things get a bit out of hand. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Aug 26, 2003 |
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Obviously early Allene. It is always enjoyable to read an early work by an author who later went on to write better and better things.<br>This story cries out to be rewritten and reposted under a different title. Now that Allene has become an experienced author, the quick revision and division of this story into five to ten downloads should be a piece of cake. Similarly revision would allow better shaping of the climax of the story.<br>This story is definitely a diamond in the rough. (7/10)
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