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Case Of The Missing Inmates Author: Evil Misstress
(Added on Feb 4, 2005) (This month 53678 readers) (Total 70526 readers)
Two lady officers are to go and escort to hardened prisioners back for a trial date but things don't go as planned and they themselves are made to take their places.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Oct 7, 2010
Evil Mistress just offered us a good idea, but the writing itself is below par, I'm afraid. At least, on the technical side of things.
The story consists of a stacking of run-on sentences, which --to keep things interesting-- lack almost any kind of punctuation marks, bar full stops.
No quotation marks either. And since the dialogue is embedded within the sentences, this makes for some very awkward reading.
I feel that "The Case Of The Missing Inmates" is a nice effort. Original too. With a bit of weeding, taking a tad more care about the syntax and adding the much needed punctuation marks, this could become far better than what it is now.
JJ (6/10)

Reviewer: tpdar (Edit) Rating: Feb 19, 2005
Very good start - looking forward to the continuation of the story. (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Feb 6, 2005
need more story to rate it higher (7/10)

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