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My Monster
Author: a*bit*bent
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(Added on Mar 4, 2005)
(This month 70433 readers) (Total 85616 readers) |
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The daily life of a closeted submissive man who's submissive yearnings constantly haunt him. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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This story proves that a Dom sub relation can be friendly and without rude insulting language and or brutalities. The story is also exposing well the characters as other readers said. Well done (9/10)
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- Replied by:
abitbent
(Edit) (Mar 30, 2006)
- A heartfelt thanx to you jip and all the rest who enjoyed this story. I'm far from a writer that is for sure! I'm just glad you all liked it.
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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I loved reading My Monster. I loved the plot and the lead character was so cute which I am sure is not the word you were looking for. I am a hopeless romantic so to see the nice guy win for a change makes you all warm and fuzzy inside. The character develeopment was very well done. It was intense where it needed to be but never to the point of overkill. You seem to know when to use the big guns and when not which is one of the signs of a good writer. It was very well written and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. P.S. I love your name, wish I would have thought of it first. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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Great plot well thought out and very organizes in telling the story. (9/10)
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Microwave0ven
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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Great short story! I really enjoyed it, your detail is wonderful, and I really like the way that the relationship between this Domme and sub is a respectable one, not the typical "on your knees, slave" type of relationship. Thank you! (10/10)
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robert216
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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Certainly not the usual story posted on the Internet. This one was much more developed, and rich in detail. Well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slavetoby
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2007)
- I have been a sub male as long as i can remember, and have read hundreds if not more stories about this special lifestyle. This is most definately the best story i have ever read. Perfect. I really hope there are more chapters
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