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Evil Twins
Author: Cerberus
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(Added on Apr 19, 2005)
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Diana and her twin brother swim the warm waters of sins of the flesh and then blackmail Daddy. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
biondani
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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Can't wait for part 2 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Apr 22, 2005 |
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This story promises much, but fortunately for the reader, the author has a history of delivering. I anxiously await future installments. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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A nice start to the story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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The writing is well above average except in minor spots where the vocabulary gets a bit florid,love channel and cock snot indeed! The level of heat is high, no complaints there. However extremely precocious and highly sophisticated teens able to outsmart relatively intelligent adults always bothers me. Now we are introduced to a nameless cheerleader, or meat puppet; I presume another excuse for some mindless violence. I can't help but compare this story unfavorably with others from the author. I am not as optimistic as other reviewers when it comes to anticipating some miracle from the writer that can change the direction of this cliched effort. Despite my cavils this story is still head and shoulders above much of the material posted on this site. If my concerns prove to be groundless, I will be the first to admit it by revising my rating and review. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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The story it self was ok, i enjoed reading it but as the previous reviwer noted ther are many stories similar already, some new and fresh is needed (7/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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While a common theme to begin with, I feel certain further chapters will lead Cerberus down fresh paths of depravity.
Well written and grammatically correct as always. Good stuff, my friend! (9/10)
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