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Satan's Cellar
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Apr 29, 2005)
(This month 28788 readers) (Total 50286 readers) |
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Judy reads about the nearby sex club on an Internet site and although she is under eighteen she manages to persuade them to allow her to train as a slave. Michael, an electrician is employed to re-wire the cellar and decides he wishes to become a master but for a year he must first experience life as a slave. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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May 11, 2005 |
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The story was fun, the passion was missing during the sex scenes. These scenes were pretty intense, yet they didn't feel that way when I was reading it. Only after, when I thought about what the characters had gone through. (7/10)
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longrover
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May 4, 2005 |
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This story might have been a response to my comments about "Mary Jane," but there hasn't been enough time. I loved Judy's revolt and the general reaction to it. Too many stories seem to admire excessive behavior (like Paul's, here) and the inability to listen (like Michael in "Mary Jane"). It's nice to see such a bozo get what he deserves. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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May 3, 2005 |
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Good quality story of extensive leangth with enough twists and turns to make me hang in there. Chksng19 is right though a bit of proof reading would do it no harm. (9/10)
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chksng19
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May 2, 2005 |
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Good story, well written and lots of fun.
Interesting ending; revolt a little unexpected.
Too many "spell-checker" error wrong words. A little distracting.
More story codes needed. F/M, anal, college,others. Let people know what they're getting. Will also get you more reads when people look in advanced search. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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I think it would be nice if the writer adds to this. In adding, like the club's special meeting, maybe what happens have some low grades, and so on. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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i have read beeter but i have read far worse, not sure how realistic this is (7/10)
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